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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas 
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I lay close to you as the artic air peirces my lungs The transcendental northern lights waltz above us Our fingers intwinded, united together as one This is truly heaven on earth.  |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful piece. It's short, but it speaks volumes. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I liked it. Very nice. However I'd like for you to explain what you meant by "transcendental northern lights" because from what I know.....it's a philosophy......simplistic and very much a nature oriented one. Is this why? Explain.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Very touching. A nice, simple image. Kinda makes ya think of people that you love, doesn't it? Keep up the good work. -Allan Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it? |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey i really liked this.. short and too the point.. great work "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This is so dreamy and romantic  Great work! |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Dopey_dope....Have you ever heard of the "northern lights" in Alaska? They are called Aorora Borealis (don't know about the spelling) I don't know a lot about them but I watched a movie in one of my science classes and they are absolutly stunning.I used the word "transcendental" b/c I saw it once in a book and it sounded "magical". To me the Aurora Borealis are magical. I do not know what the true meaning of the word is though..... ~* Lovebug, Allan, anomaly187 & Suga_Baby*~ Thanks for your replys. I'm glad you like it. |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
That's a really nice poem, creates a nice image of a perfect moment with someone you love. & how did you get that wickid moving ring thingy~? its so cool! luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
holy damnit all excuse my language but you write so good in short style i loved it, WOW -JDR "I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking." |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
~*Luvnkris*~ you just go to avaible images, highlight the one you want, hit Ctrl + C the go back to the page you were wirtting and hit Ctrl + V...Thanks for your reply. ~* Jeremy *~ LOL!!! You crack me up! Thanks you so much. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I love it.....I love it.....I love it I'd love to see this sight too I wanna go to Alaska I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
It's short but good Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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