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Teen Poetry #4

untitled (to my mom)

litle_krazy_poet
Member

since 2001-01-17

Posts 71

0 posted 2001-01-29 11:19 PM

i wrote this for my mom. i havent really seen her for almoast a year, well i hope you like it

i see my mom
now in bed
with the pillow
on her head

she gets up
to get a drink
takes a sip
pours rest in sink

she takes a walk
sits and sees
my pic
and embraces me

i love her
this is true
i want her to know
this through and through

somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-01-29 11:23 PM

This is sad but you do know she loves you.......Nice one here. Full of expression. Hope you see her soon.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-01-30 07:00 PM

I know how you feel. I haven't seen my mom in more that 3 years

I know she feels the same and hope that you both stay storng till the day you meet again

keep you head up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Hallie_Angel
Member

since 2000-12-06

Posts 102

3 posted 2001-01-30 07:30 PM

Hey,
Keep your head up and keep a smile on your face. See ya round g2g. Buh-Bye

~Catherine

Greeneyes617
Member

since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-01-31 12:57 PM

ooooh! How sweet. I do hope you have let your mother read this. If not you should. Wonderful poem.

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

5 posted 2001-01-31 02:45 AM

This one was great. I am glad that you know she loves you. I hope that you two will be reunited in the near future.

Stephanya
Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~

6 posted 2001-01-31 05:01 AM

[** Aww, so sweet, Keep you chin up, everything will be okay, keep up the good work

(:*stephani*:)A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end*

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