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Sitting here in my Window ( Love Poem)
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Sitting here in my Window ( Love Poem) |
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Yankee10n20BFF Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 27T-Town, AL |
I'm sitting here in looking out my window Watching the rain fall from up above I'm thinking of how much I miss you Your beautiful eyes, your soul, especially your love. I never thought it would be this hard To live life without you by my side All I want to do now is see your face And tell you everything I've been having to hide I promise you that I'm always here No matter the number of miles we are apart My soul will forever be with you I've loved you ever since the very start. Your eyes are so beautiful So innocent, genuine, and true When they look at me I crumble inside They were the first thing that drew me to you. Your smile is so amazingly perfect It's the second thing that I most love No one could ever compare to it I think it's the best gift from up above. Your body is perfect in my eyes Protected by the softest skin I've ever felt The way you walk wand move your body Being near you makes me melt. If you walked in my room right now I would hold you all through the night I would gently kiss your sweet, gentle lips And never let you leave my sight. You'll never know how much I love you I could never express myself in writing I would have to show you physically and emotionally Exactly what I'm feeling for you inside. If I could only give you this poem Then you'll get just a hint of how I feel Maybe you'll see that we are mant for each other And know my love for you is so real I'm sitting here looking out my window Praying someday you'll love me too I'll never give up on that wish Because I know I'll never love anyone but you. No matter what you are going through, all you have to do is close your eyes and dream cause no one can take them away from you. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a wonderful love poem. If only somebody would write a love poem like this for me and truly mean it..........I'd be in awe that somebody had these feelings for me. Anyway, wonderful job.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
yah, i have to agree with the dopester here id be electrified if someone ever wrote something like that for me good job on conveying your feelings i hope you do give it to them ~JDR "I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful sentiments of love and longing ... you've expressed your desire beautifully in these tender words, very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job of writing this poem! The title is what caught my attention, it's good Keep writing and posting "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
This is an wonderful poem. A while ago I knew exactly how you feel. I thought the pain from a breakup would never go away, but it does, I promise, and you'll move on. Time just has to do its "thing". Great poem, keep writing.  ) |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
ah, that was great! i really enjoyed reading it! i'm sorry that you're in this situation... maybe you should give them the poem, you never know... it worked for me when i loved someone and they didn't know! i just gave them a poem and now 7mths later we are so in love and we both want to be together forever! good luck! Luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautiful....simply beautiful your words and feelings penned in such wonder why don't you show this person the poem i'd melt if got a poem like this I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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