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Teen Poetry #4

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NeverSayDie
Junior Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 39
Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND

0 posted 2001-01-29 08:09 PM

How i fell change by day
But one thing I know will always stay

I will be your friend
From now till the end

But if this may change
may there be no revenge

Friends are forever
Dates do not last

The memories may still hurt me
But there always in the past

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

1 posted 2001-01-29 08:24 PM

WOW!!! I just love this it is wonderful. I hope you dont mind if i add this to my library so i may look at it once again when i need a spiritual lift. Great poem. Please keep posting and shareing with us all. Love ~Amanda~

What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-29 08:45 PM

Hey nice one here.
I liked it and hope to see you post more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

3 posted 2001-01-29 09:19 PM

this is awesome!

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-01-29 09:20 PM

Good positive poem.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

5 posted 2001-01-29 09:22 PM

very broviliquent
straight to the point and it was a pleasure to read
please keep posting

~JDR

"I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-01-30 06:28 PM

well done...great expression of one's feelings. keep posting

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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