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Hallie_Angel
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0 posted 2001-01-28 11:19 PM


  I see you sweetly sitting next to me,
I see how kind just one guy can be.
  When the ohers don't care,
You just being there,
  Is good for me to know.
It helps me grow.
  We do not know each other,
We wont ever be together.
  Aloneness makes us comfy,
and thats the way we like to be.
  You sitting there not saying anything,
me as humble as can be watching your phone ring.
  I like you a lot,
because you make me happy and you don't know.
  I think your pretty cool,
because you go with your feelings and your flow.
  You are an odd one,
your mom says you are.
  You take all the cushoins,
and lay on them ajar.
  You are yourself,
and will always be.
  Finially what I've been waiting for,
someone just like me!

This is for an eighteen year old guy I met who was just there when no one else was. You made me laugh and I think we were very similar. This is for you Chris!
  

                                      ~Catherine


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jeremydraul
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State of Despair
1 posted 2001-01-28 11:25 PM


a very nice tribute Hallie!
im sure he would love it!
it's sad to hear that you cant be with the one you like...
thats what happens in life...
i guess you just have to wait for that person to come a long
until then, enjoy this wonderful friendship

~JDR

Hallie_Angel
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2 posted 2001-01-28 11:28 PM


Thank you but we probably wont speak again. It was a one day thing. Thank you for replying. See ya round!

                                ~Catherine

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-01-28 11:48 PM


Nice one here Hallie, I surely hope you do speak again though. GOod luck!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2001-01-29 12:09 PM


In reply to your post in my poem.....i decided to reply here. Hope you see it.
Anyway of course i'd sit next to you if you were alone. If there's one thing I hate is somebody looking like they're alone or bored.....I like to cheer them up and get them active or happy and such.
So, yes i'd sit next to you.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allysa
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5 posted 2001-01-29 08:31 AM


Okay, spill the beans girlie. WHO the heck is Chris!? ANyways, nice one here, byes.

I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad.


Hallie_Angel
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6 posted 2001-01-29 04:05 PM


Thank you Alyssa!!! See you tomorrow!!! Got to split!! Bye!

                            ~Catherine

Acies
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7 posted 2001-01-30 05:39 PM


I really do hope you see him again.  hey, you never know what happens in the future  
thanks for the read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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