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Leap of Faith Into The Fire(Southern Senryu)
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Leap of Faith Into The Fire(Southern Senryu) |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Ok everyone. I tried to make a senryu but it didnt turn out right. So when you read it say it with a southern accent and it will still be a senryu. I know i'm sad, but i am trying to fix my sort of senryu. So please for me say it with a southern accent. OK thank you. Walk upon the fire. Hells implicit freezing flame, Shattered by desire. < !signature--> What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
looks like it turned out absolutely terrfic... definately one of my favorite senryus thank you for sharing this one! sounds like what Im going through you used great detail in such a small limitation of syllables great job ~JDR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well I read it with a southern accent. No idea why you wanted us to. Great senryu though. You know.........Dreadedliver asked us to read his poem PISSED OFF......you asked for a southern accent.......I think next time i'll ask for you all to read one of my poems in a german guy trying to impersonate a irish guy trying to impersonate a moose accent. How about it folks?  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I read it with a southern accent.... You're lucky I'm in acting class, and I have to talk funny sometimes!!  It was good!! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
lol @ Dopey. If you ask for me to read it that way I promise to do my best and succeed. *well try to* And why I asked you all to read it that way is a long story. Jeremy~ *smiling Thank you so much. You dont know how much it means to me, and i appreciate it very much. Thank you Jenn~ heheh. Thanks. And it is a good thing you are in acting class. *smiling. What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
lovely senryu, but i too don't know why i had to read it with a southern accent. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
lol @ acrie it is sort of a short story that i dont wish to tell. thanks for your comment though |
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