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Hallie_Angel
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since 2000-12-06
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0 posted 2001-01-28 11:04 PM


  I cry myself to sleep at night,
wondering if it's just me that isn't right.
  Why don't they astualy care?
Why in the h*** aren't they there?
  I can't comprehend why they dont love me,
I don't understand why me is wrong to be.


Hey Yall! The Cat is back!

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~*Buffy Summers*~
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since 2000-11-30
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Avondale,AZ,USA
1 posted 2001-01-28 11:07 PM


Nice But Short...Sweet but angry like. LUV OUR POEM...Going threw a tough break up...Kinda makes me think!

Kim Rayann

Hallie_Angel
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2 posted 2001-01-28 11:35 PM


Thanx!!!
Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-01-28 11:53 PM


*hugs*
I LOVE YOU!

hehe........
Welcome back!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Hallie_Angel
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4 posted 2001-01-28 11:57 PM


Thank you Dopey. I love you too. I'm so glad to be back!


                            ~Catherine

Baby G
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since 2001-01-28
Posts 39
Australia
5 posted 2001-01-29 03:44 AM


Hey Hallie Angel, I really loved your poem, it sounds like yoou were feeling lonely that night, I hope you aren't anymore!  Keep  
DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
6 posted 2001-01-29 10:49 AM


Very touching poem. I hope you start feeling better, it is a horrible thing to feel unloved.

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.


Hallie_Angel
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since 2000-12-06
Posts 102

7 posted 2001-01-29 04:03 PM


Thank you all. Writing poems helps me get it out!!! I feel much better!


                                 ~Catherine

Hallie_Angel
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since 2000-12-06
Posts 102

8 posted 2001-01-29 04:03 PM


Thank you all. Writing poems helps me get it out!!! I feel much better!


                                 ~Catherine

Jenn Cirrincione
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9 posted 2001-01-29 04:51 PM


Nice, very nice!!  
I hope you're feeling better, and keep writing!

xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??


Acies
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10 posted 2001-01-30 05:47 PM


welcome back
you know, when you feel this way, just come to passions
you know we care  


I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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