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jytree
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0 posted 2001-01-28 09:01 PM


Test yourself,
Test your life,
Test yourself againist the flame of might,

Hide yourself behind that tree,
But in hideing you shall never been free,
Come with step into the fire,
Come see if your a man or a lier.

Test youself against the flame,
I will promise you will never been the same,
Step into the light and open you eyes,
Turn around to get a big surprise,

To see Jesus stand in the fire with you,
Wii desire in his eyes,
Make it to him if you can,
Prove to him that you are a man.

God know what in your heart quit hideing,
Instead let him bring you apart,
Heart and mind,
Spirit and control over them will let you see,

Stand in the fire and let yourself be free.


Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



© Copyright 2001 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
HiddenSparklez
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1 posted 2001-01-28 09:08 PM


Very good... it's very daring.  

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Angel in Flight
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2 posted 2001-01-28 10:13 PM


WOW!! This poem is amazing, and I loved it dearly. There is just one thing I disagree with, but you know that one thing is overtaken by so many other so I will not say it. WONDERFUL POEM AND PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!! This is great. Love always ~*~ Amanda~*~

What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda


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3 posted 2001-01-28 11:33 PM


Nice one here jytree......very good poem.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jytree
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4 posted 2001-01-30 12:42 PM


the meaning behind it was to test yourself see your streanghts and weaknesses let God open a door to your heart&body&soul&mind to find this stuff out.

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



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5 posted 2001-01-30 07:03 PM


very uplifting poem.  Thanks for reminding us that He will always be there if we only accept to see the light  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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