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Angel in Flight
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0 posted 2001-01-27 04:49 PM


This is directed mainly toward one person. You know who you are.


An angel in flight erstwhile was you,
momentarily detached wings annihilate us two.
“I love you” Nevermore conceived to be,
we in no configuration will be a family.
We no longer fly above, for
we no further preside over any love.
I convicted and visualize you were a dream come true,
But An angel in flight was not ever you.



What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda


© Copyright 2001 Amanda - All Rights Reserved
Ina
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1 posted 2001-01-27 05:20 PM


Amanda,
your poem was beautiful. Allan is a boy, in my eyes who will never stop loving you. The hurt you have done to him, will always be there.  I know he loves you, because he always talks about you, i can just see the smile on his face. Your poetry is beautiful and i seriously hope that you both will love each other forever and never let go.
dont get angry at him for telling me.
Regina

Angel in Flight
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2 posted 2001-01-27 09:09 PM


Regina,

What you say I truly hope is true.

Allan, We have talked and I still believe what I had said to be true. Nothing will ever be the same again. And I believe you should fly if not for me then for you. Alot has gone on in a matter of moments. Time stands still for no one, and i dont wish you to waste your time lieing upon the sand with me. Fly and i'll watch you. Even with one wing you have the strength to sore. Do so and you will see what may become.

ps.And find the strength to leave me behind.  

~Amanda~



What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda


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3 posted 2001-01-28 12:21 PM


Oh great.........something went on behind the scenes. Well No comment here......

the poem itself.......nice.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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4 posted 2001-01-28 03:16 AM


Aww Amanda, you know how much he cares for you and he will NEVER leave you behind. He has got enough strength in him to stick by you all the way through whatever has happened.

Have confidence in the situation Amanda. It can take you to unimaginable places.

~AF~

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."
Buddha

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5 posted 2001-01-28 01:24 PM


heartwarming poem Amanda
you do have to remember that arguements also arise from people who care about you
that's part of life, that's part of the learning process
keep you head up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Angel in Flight
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6 posted 2001-01-28 01:44 PM


Alright, everyone I just wish to say that you are alll very sweet and I would like to thank all of you for your support and friendship, but there is nothing to worry about. Allan and I will always be friends, we just wont be as close as we once were. Thank you all for your consern.

What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda


~*Buffy Summers*~
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7 posted 2001-01-28 01:48 PM


Hey Nice poem,
Amanda...
Written very nice and angelic-like...
Always like the angel you are! Well Whats more to say. Beautyfull Poem.


Kim Rayann

jeremydraul
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8 posted 2001-01-28 03:22 PM


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9 posted 2001-01-28 04:11 PM


wow looks like there's been trouble in paradise and i missed it all when i was gone. well i dunno if things have worked out yet, but i hope they do...good poem

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Angel in Flight
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10 posted 2001-01-28 04:14 PM


Buffy~ Thank you that was sweet.

Dance queen~ Thank you. I hope so also


[This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-28-2001).]

Ina
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11 posted 2001-01-28 08:43 PM


Amanda
dont do this to him! dont tell me to have strength!when you do not do what u preach!
regina
IM on aol
skatergirlz14
im veery serious

~*Buffy Summers*~
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12 posted 2001-01-28 09:04 PM


Im only telling the truth   your an angel and when Im met you u lite my day up. Thanks for even reading the poem I wrote Im glad I NOW have a friend like you...
LYLAS~


Kim Rayann

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