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Hold Me, Love Me
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Hold Me, Love Me |
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lilpoet Member
since 2000-12-30
Posts 55Dallas,Tx |
Here's another song!! This one is my favorite. Hope you like it! Chours: Hold me, Love me That's all I'm asking for Keep me safe in your arms I'm not asking for more Hold me, love me Like I love you Don't hold your love inside When you know that this is true Sometimes we get carried away And don't realize that we've Gone astray There gets to be so much stress And when everything's a mess... Chours Now that I have cancer We're just searching for the best answer Well, love is all we need It stands in front of us- it leads Chours Love is the only way out of this It's somthing that we miss WE can work this out In my heart I have no doubt Chours 2x ~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is good. Kudos! However, do you really have cancer? If so, I'm really sorry. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a nice one, but I surely hope you don't have cancer. Good song here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this is really good. if you do have cancer i'm so sorry. my aunt just recently passed away from cancer. but love can get you through it. if i didn't have the love from everyone around me, i dont' knwo what i'd do. nice way of expressing that. valerie *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This was a beautiful song and very true. Love can get us through anything. I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
so puuuuuurrtty!! Hehe! I luv it!! Luv is all we need, and once you find true luv, u r soooooo much better off! Great job on this one, keep it up!! Much Luv, ~*~Sweetstuff~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
SRY! double post!! But I guess its so purty it deserves 2! font>< !signature--> How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I hope this is not true....I pray it isn't If it is, you've shown a wonderful way to take it the song is beautiful thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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