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lilpoet
Member

since 2000-12-30

Posts 55
Dallas,Tx

0 posted 2001-01-27 01:41 PM

*this is a song that I made up. Hope you like it!*

This part is spoken:
Times with you can be rough
And there are times of happiness
But when things get rough
I'll always be here

*the rest of it is sung*

Chours:
Baby, you don't understand
That you are my man
And I'm not going anywhere
I'm holding on to this love
That we share
Oh, you don't understand
That we'll make it, oh we can
And I'm not going anywhere
Wouldn't leave if it was a dare...

I'm holding on
Till the day that you're gone
Cause I love you
This I know is true

Chours

When we go through pain
It makes us go insane
But I'm telling you baby,
I'm not going anywhere, oh yea...
I'm holding on to this love that we share...

Chours

(that's it!! Hope you like it..and I don't really have a certian tune for it. )

~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

1 posted 2001-01-27 02:09 PM

Hmmmmm.... love it's so wonderful, ain't it tho??
No, really, this is sweet.

xoxo
Jenn

"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-27 11:59 PM

*tries to talk with a stuffy nose*

nice one here. I liked it a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-01-28 12:16 PM

this is great!! that's one of the things i haven't attempted... a song. i don't think i ever will. lol for some reason i just don't think my voice would sound right. i sing like a baboon. LOL jk

but great job i love it!!

~Valerie~

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

4 posted 2001-01-28 01:04 PM

Very nice song you've written here...if this is based on you personally I hope things work out for you.

I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

5 posted 2001-01-28 05:03 PM

lol @ dopey

lilpoet~ Wonderful song you have here. I got a vivid picture of love. It is truly wonderful keep up the great work.
~Amanda~

What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-01-28 11:46 PM

It's truly amazing to see how each person express their love for an individual

beautiful song
keep writing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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