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jytree
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0 posted 2001-01-27 02:18 AM


Sitting bonded in this darkned tunel of love,
I sit captive from not listing to God above,
Leave her alone she is no right,
I look back and truly was I would of listend that night.

Rounding she snuggels up close,
That sicking feeling hit me and I am going to blow chuncks all over the boat,
She grabs my body and holds in tight,
I start praying to God please save my life,

SO begging contious to secure my life,
And the boat stops next to a chaple of light,
I start thanking GOd saying I will become a monk for my life,
But the nightmare contuies she want to be my wife,
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!,

After hearing that I run my all my might,
Because there is no way she is getting me alone tonight,
So in the distance I hear a boat near I pear,
So with my nikes I hop over the bazire,

Running for my life going for the pear,
I Hear her saying "wait dear",
So faster I run leaping into the sea,
Blinking for a sec I think I am finally free,

But wait why is it so dark,
So shoot I have been eaten by a shark,
But I shark became my freind,
He finally let my nightmare end.

© Copyright 2001 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
jytree
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1 posted 2001-01-27 02:19 AM


I hope you like this one it is just funny and I JUST MADE IT UP  so I know I can't spell so other than that enjoy.

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-01-27 02:24 PM


This was funny. Talk about afraid of comitment.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies
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3 posted 2001-01-27 02:34 PM


You have a great imagination if you just made this up
It sounded like a real dream you had
Very descriptive
thanks for the read
keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



jytree
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4 posted 2001-01-27 02:36 PM


like I said I just made it up I never had a dream like this one.
                    .
                     .
                        yet!



Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



anomaly187
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5 posted 2001-01-27 04:42 PM


lol have to agree with dopey..this is a gerat post full of imagination...great work

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"


Greeneyes617
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6 posted 2001-01-28 08:46 PM


Oh Jay....what am I ever going to do with you.....Great peom.
~*Malinda*~

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