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For My Love |
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Yankee10n20BFF Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 27T-Town, AL |
There is something about you That just drives me crazy, Your eyes, your smile, your personality I love everything about you baby. I wish you knew how much I love you How much I wanna kiss your soft lips, If only I could look deep into your eyes And wrap my arms around your gentle hips. I remember when you held my hand As we laid there in your bed, I wanted to tell you what you meant to me But I kept it all in my head. Everytime I am with you It's as if it couldn't get any better, You make me so dang happy baby I wish we could just be together. If only you were mine I would treat you so right, I would whisper sweet words to you And hold you throughout the night. I'm sitting here starring at your picture Wishing I could hold you in my arms for all time, I'd do anything to show you my love for you And to express to the world that you are mine. When I lay down to sleep at night My head spins with thoughts about you, On how amazingly beautiful you are And how much I pray my dreams come true. I promise you I'll love you forever No matter what life may have in store, You mean so much to me baby I've never loved anyone this much before. When God put you on the earth I think he put you here for me to love, Whether it be just friends or more I know you are a gift from up above. If I had to chose between life and death And death icluded you for me to love and care, I would chose death in an instant Because life without you I couldn't bear. No matter what you are going through, all you have to do is close your eyes and dream cause no one can take them away from you. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
heh what a die hard love poem...you wrote this with great emotion and it showed through your pen...very sweet post..great work "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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DreadedLiver Member
since 2001-01-23
Posts 56Alter, Ego |
wow, talk about devotion to someone... this was so sweet maybe give the poem to this person? great poem, keep up this kind writing -Knightfellow "If you had a choice to believe in yourself, or another person, who would it be?" |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
That was really good...I will say this again for the millionth time...I wish some guy would write that bout me!!! It was really sweet, I can tell you really like that person go get em....don't be shy!!!! Keep writing!!! ~LOVE~ *~*S*T*E*P*H*A*N*I*E*~* *~*Hope is a walking dream*~* *~*Don't take life too seriosly~~~you'll never get out alive*~* |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
Wow! so so so sweet!! Great poem! she's a lucky girl |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this poem is sooooo good. like you have no idea you have some talent boy!!! this poem is very sentimental to me now because if it were from my point of view that's exactly how i feel towards my bf. except for the part about looking at his pic. LOL well stupendious job!! g/l in da future!!! Valerie *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is really sweet. It's great you feel this way about someone you're with. You write well. However, I'm just all bleah on the love poem thing. So this is just another one of 'em... eeehhhh. That's ok tho...  xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was really really good. The emotion put into this, wow i could just feel it. It consumed my body. It made *ME* want him.......AND I'm NOT EVEN GAY!!!!! Anyway, nice one here. A true display of poetry.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a beautiful poem...dont u wish they knew exactly how you felt sometimes??? This was a great poem hun |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You'v penned down such heartwarming feelings for someone. She must be a really special someone. Like what everyone else has said, really sweet poem. thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Oh I LOVE this!! this is a great site! Thank you Val for sending me here!! Wow, this poem escribes how I felt (feel) about Kate. She's wonderful, so's the poem. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
geez, I feel REALLY dumb right now, I need to add this to my library too, lotsa good stuff on here. I swear, this site needs a newsletter "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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