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Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

0 posted 2001-01-26 07:23 PM

Subdued and tranquil, with liquid eyes.
Audacity awaits the lamentation and sighs
Eyes luminescence effulgently though melancholy still.
A smile emerges through Hells semitransparent hill.
And as the tempest thrashes the cloaked vest.
You shall descry you’ve tried your best.
And so I expound permit the thunder roar.
Grant the lightening strike.
Have the tears pour.
For you’ll never encountering what you conceivable do.........
unless you let the storm come through.
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look forward,But forget not the past for it has brought you this far~by Allan and Amanda

[This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-26-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-01-26 10:38 PM

This was really good. I liked this poem a lot. Liquid eyes.........that stood out in the poem for me for some reason. Anyway the poem was well written.
I liked the message too.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anomaly187
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

2 posted 2001-01-26 10:54 PM

wow this is amazing...you wrote this perfect ly and the end just wraps it up so well...great work

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

DreadedLiver
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since 2001-01-23

Posts 56
Alter, Ego

3 posted 2001-01-27 12:03 PM

my favorite line was:
"A smile emerges through Hells semitransparent hill."
that created a vivid scene, great job...
and beautiful description

-Knightfellow

"If you had a choice to believe in yourself, or another person, who would it be?"

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

4 posted 2001-01-27 12:54 PM

Dopey~ Thank you for your comment it was much appreciated.

anomaly~ Thank you for the smile

Knightfellow~ Thank you for the comment and I am pleased to hear that you have gotten a vivid scene from the poem.

look forward,But forget not the past for it has brought you this far~by Allan and Amanda

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-01-27 03:32 PM

glad to see you're posting again
what a way to do so
marvelous writing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

AniKay83
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since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

6 posted 2001-01-27 04:05 PM

And as the tempest thrashes the cloaked vest.
You shall descry you’ve tried your best.
And so I expound permit the thunder roar.
Grant the lightening strike.
Have the tears pour.
=============================================
Really loved this. Great imagery.

"Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable"
~The Wizard of Oz
Much love all,
Krissie

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

7 posted 2001-01-28 05:16 PM

Acrie~ Glaid to see all of you again. And thank you

Anikay~ Thank you for the smile as well as comment. Very much appreciated.

~Amanda~

What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda

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