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DreamerGrl27
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0 posted 2001-01-25 09:37 PM




Who do you turn to?

Who do you go to talk to
When no one understands
Who do ask to help you
When no one's reaching out their hand.
Who do you go to cry to
When there's no shoulder there for you
Who do you go to if cant take anymore
When no one knows what you're going through.
Who do you see that makes you smile
When everyone brings tears to your eyes
Who do you go to for advice
When the whole world tells you lies.
Who do you ask to help you up
When everyone lets you fall
Who do you dial as you pick up the phone
When there's no numbers left to call.
Who do you hold on to
When there's no one by your side
Who do you give your heart to
When it hurts so much inside.



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anomaly187
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1 posted 2001-01-25 09:52 PM


hey this is written with such emotion...i feel like this a lot so i understand what you are saying and going through...if you are feeling this i hope you find that someone...great work

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"


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2 posted 2001-01-26 01:27 PM


I'm osrry you feel that way about your life right now
hopping that this is not really going on in your life
if it is, you know the answer is PIP
yes, Passions  
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3 posted 2001-01-26 03:34 PM


   I've found that sometimes the only person you can trust is yourself...but I don't recommend that...It gets pretty lonely...I wish you the best of luck...
   ~Carly

inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog...

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4 posted 2001-01-26 05:41 PM


GReat job on this poem. I loved it a lot. You wrote it well.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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