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anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

0 posted 2001-01-25 09:22 PM

close your eyes
erase my mouth
disease my life
(but only if you see fit)
strike me dead
i'll come back
burn yourselves
enslaved genocide

open your eyes
but only in
the night
someone will hear
go hide
and run
they're bound
to wake

inexcuse me
delete my mind
erect
your
steeple's
behind my-

no, it's too late
to bring me down
'fore i've
been waiting
in the dirt
you've raped me
of my thoughts
and shattered-
look at all
i've lost

protest the wealth of hate in me
protest everything that you cannot see
leave my essence raped
and torn
bleeding off
a page
in a back alley
protest my voice that's meant to be
protest

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2001-01-26 02:56 PM

Another amazing piece, anomaly...and the perfect poem to fit my mood...I think I could only understand this when I'm in this state of mind...please keep blessing us with your talent...
~Carly

inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog...

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-26 05:39 PM

This was great anomaly. The passion and power within your writing is outstanding. I love it......good job on this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

3 posted 2001-01-26 07:28 PM

....wow....

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

4 posted 2001-01-27 12:14 PM

wooh, vivid description...i love the whole idea of protest
you brought me to my knees begging for more!

~JDR

"Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

5 posted 2001-01-27 10:17 PM

thanks guys...and carly i was just looking back at my old work and you were always a big supporter heh thanks...you too dope..well thanks again jeremy and pharon

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

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