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Jell-o and Sex Dice

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Dark Enchantress
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0 posted 01-25-2001 02:51 PM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

Blistering hatred
for the coils
on which my soul dances
The soil that my seeds
were planted in
poisoned my roots
by it's deviate tongue
And therein lies my tragedy
As I embark on
endless night
and dark contemplation
Brooding spells
to veil my confusion
and the disaray
of my disenchanted spirit
I am merely a child
who embraced the unknown
without ever knowing
it'd swallow me whole


I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness




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1 posted 01-25-2001 06:04 PM       View Profile for Jenn Cirrincione   Email Jenn Cirrincione   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn Cirrincione

Well, I'm not too sure about the title, but the poem was interesting. Could you explain a little? It might flow easier if you head me in the right direction, thanks.  

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Jenn


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2 posted 01-25-2001 07:04 PM       View Profile for katherine   Email katherine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for katherine

wow powerful.
Isabel Galaxia
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3 posted 01-25-2001 08:03 PM       View Profile for Isabel Galaxia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Isabel Galaxia

Great poem, quite powerful.  Can I inquire about the title...?
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4 posted 01-25-2001 11:17 PM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

The title...well...I asked Dopey_Dope for some cool words cuz I couldn't think of a title. He thought of jell-o and I came up with sex dice. Kinda tells you where our minds were. lol I hope I haven't offended anyone, but you know...it happens. Thanks for your replies.  

I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness




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In the space between moments


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Extremely powerful and enchanting...seemed like a rendezvous with the occult to me...the title is a little odd, but the poem itself is great!  Good work!  

*Krista Knutson*

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In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
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6 posted 01-26-2001 05:18 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Haha I didn't know I helped you out hahahaha..........Dude, I oughta do that with titles from now on. This title ROCKS! Completely!!!!!! Jell-0 and Sex Dice.....wow.
The poem was great too.......
Good job on this one.



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I admire it daily
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Damn girl.... powerful.

~ Titus

I'm dealing with too much.... I'm loosing control.

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