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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
It's been awhile since I've posted, but how is this for a Grand Entrance? Though my step is light My heart is heavy. My feelings are true as are my intentions. I've tried to drop subtle hints. But you never seem to acknowledge them. Should I give up? This lonely fight. I ask over and over your answer evades me. Maybe I should? It's not to be Seeing your eyes I turn and leave. [This message has been edited by chic (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This a great poem. Really sad, but really well written. nice work ~Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ditto.  Welcome back, I remember you!! hehe This was really good, title??? hmmmmm... "Never meant to be" ?? Maybe? Again good job. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
great poem! |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey! great grand entrance!...loved the poem..keep up the good work "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
it's nice to se that you know how to take things in stride That's one thing I need to learn from you this shows me how strong your character is thanks for sharing and welcome back  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
all I can say about it is "touch me I'm on fire! ya ya!! Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Thanx for ur replies and sorry I haven't replied sooner. I recently and finally got a job so I've been out of it. I liked the title "Never Meant To Be." It works. p.s.. SOMEONE GET SOME WATER FOR JYTREE  |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Thanx for ur replies and sorry I haven't replied sooner. I recently and finally got a job so I've been out of it. I liked the title "Never Meant To Be." It works. p.s.. SOMEONE GET SOME WATER FOR JYTREE "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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MidnightMaverick Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 35Duluth, MN, USA |
I thought I just saw you. *lol* Good piece of work. Unfortunately I can't help you with a title for this one. love your stuff! -Maverick |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
LOL um I have no idea how that second reply got there...honestly. And thanx for your reply Mav. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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