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Wasting it away... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a really simple poem. Different style. I'm tired...Very tired. So this is just the easiest way I can say it. Don't ask me what the hell is going on because I don't know and I really don't care anymore. Is this what you wanted AF? To have the tears rolling... Rolling constantly? Rolling like rain? Do you need the questions? Come on think... Think of what is now here, Think of what you could lose. Who are you? Or does it hurt to seek memories... Memories with pain? Memories coated with insanity? What do you want? Something like freedom... Freedom of this horror? Freedom from this icy existence? So are you really? Don't you want to reveal... Reveal your heart? Reveal a slice of your soul? Do you think writing will cure it? Stop the hurting... Hurting your life? Hurting what you want to be? Who's the captain? There is a time limit... Everyone is on one you know. Everyone. Kit if you feel this is unacceptable, you can remove it and I wont have a problem with it. ~AnonymousFemale~ < !signature--> "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha [This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I think every one asks themselves these questions from time to time. Who am? who do I want to be? Where am I headed? How do I get where I want to be? Where do I want to be? etc. The aswers can only be found deep inside your self. I wish you luck on your search. This was a nice poem. Thanks for sharing ~Hason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I see no reason why a moderator would remove this. I think this is really great. I liked this one a lot. I hope all the questions are answered soon. Keep posting, I think you're very talented.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
this is a frate poem these questions are the kind thank really get the mind moveing. and the thoughts flowing. i hope everything is ok and don't do any thing that i WOULD do. no i'm just kndding don't do anything drastic well hope thing get better. ~Matt~  somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Hi AF ... I appreciate your note, but there's no cause to remove this from a guideline standpoint. From what I interpret in this poem, you're exploring some very strong emotions, and have expressed your sorrow and explored the sadness that you feel. You have not presented any detrimental acts as a viable option or conclusion. I've been writing since I was about 10 years old, and have explored many unhappy times ... writing does help, I still write out my emotions all these years later. Please take care, and if you ever want to talk, just e-mail me ... Best wishes and hugs to you AF, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey thanks for sharing this..you wrote it so well and with just so much emotion..hope to see more like this.good job "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
We all have or had to go thru times where we have to figure out what we want in life That is never easy I do agree with Kit when she says writing does help -- even a bit Keep your head up AF I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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