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Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-01-25 08:29 AM

I just want you to know we miss you.
I just want you to know we still care.
I just want you to know the secrets,
and that's we'll always be there.
I just want you to know I'm sorry.
I just want you to know we tried.
I just want you to know you mattered,
and that we sometimes lied.
I just want you to know we're missing you,
every minute of every day.
I just want to know if you listen,
to everything we have to say.
I just want you to know we won't forget,
I just want you to know we'll remember,
I just want you to know we'll pray for you,
and visit your grave in September.
I just want you to know the orange carnations,
were bought especially for you.
And I learned more about you after your death,
orange is my favorite color too.
I just want you to know we're missing you,
forever and another day,
I just want you to know we love you,
and that's all I have to say.
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For Jesica

I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad.

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

1 posted 2001-01-25 12:34 PM

Great poem Allysa. It spoke volumes about how you felt about her. Nice work.
~Jason

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-25 01:47 PM

Nice one here allysa, I liked it. Sorry about your friend. My condolences, once again. Keep that head up.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-01-25 07:10 PM

endearing sentiments Allysa
i bet you she'ss crying and at the same time proud of you right now

i love the repetitious style of the poem
again, welcome back

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

4 posted 2001-01-25 08:35 PM

Allysa...she knows, I'm sure of it.

Beautiful expressions.

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

5 posted 2001-01-25 10:49 PM

very sweet
im sure shes smiling above
and tears are raining down
this was so beautiful

~JDR

"Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

6 posted 2001-01-26 12:34 PM

this is a beautiful way to let her know you love her..i'm kind of speachless so i'll just say keepin on doing what you're doing...

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

7 posted 2001-01-26 12:34 PM

this is a beautiful way to let her know you love her..i'm kind of speachless so i'll just say keepin on doing what you're doing...

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

8 posted 2001-01-26 08:11 AM

this is a really really awesome poem. Losing people you care about & love is always hard....just keep ur head up!

I just want you to know we're missing you,
forever and another day,
I just want you to know we love you,
and that's all I have to say.

I really like your poem, great job! Keep writing!!

Much Luv,
~*~Sweetstuff~*~

How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it????

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

9 posted 2001-01-26 08:28 AM

thank you all very much!!!!!

I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad.

Fearless_Angel
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 57
Calgary, AB Canada

10 posted 2001-01-26 12:55 PM

Hey Alyssa:
Wow! Great poem. It was greatly expressed...I'm sorry about your friend. I'm sure she feels very happy about this poem and sad about the way your feeling at the same time. Keep writing! Hope things get better...=*)

Lotsa Love,
Angel
xoxoxo

"Take care and remember a certain innocent lil' Angel will alwayz be there for you..."

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

11 posted 2001-01-27 08:59 PM

This is such a beautiful tribute to your friend. I am shur she is looking down on you and im sorry she is not still with you. Beautiful poem

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

12 posted 2001-01-29 08:29 AM

thanks to everyone who read this.

I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad.

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