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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Love me, Hate me, It's too late Show me, Lead me, It's too late Open, Close, It's too late Far from here, Close and near, It's too late Life like, A door is closed For me now It's too late "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey this is a great poem written in an excellent form..i can relate to the "closed door" metaphor you put in..and in general the whole poem..great work "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job on this one Dragon.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It amazes me how some writers can simply use one word in a stanza, but not compromise the meaning. Sorry to hear that you have to, as you say, close the door on someone thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Unfortunatly, it is quite the other way around. Me being closed out of a friends life... *sighs* oh well, life goes on. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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