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No Tears...Many Fears
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No Tears...Many Fears |
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lilpoet Member
since 2000-12-30
Posts 55Dallas,Tx |
No tears... Many fears All alone... Not at home My love... Flew like a dove Went away... Profianity we say I'm blue... Without you My world... Now curled Spinning around... Screaming, But not making A sound Sad... I've done bad Biggest mistake... This isn't fake Weak... True love I seek Strong... Thout it would Last long Quickly... It happened So switfly No tears... Many fears ~ Just so you know, this poem is about a major lifetime break-up between my boyfriend and I. Notice I said "boyfriend". We are back together. ~ ~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~ |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
it's a good poem. kind of powerful in the way it's written. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice poem and I am glad to hear you got back together. Hope you're both very happy now.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautiful way of expressing your feelings. It's nice to know that you two are back together thanks for the share I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this was sooo good!! i'm glad to hear your back with your bf  most ppl couldn't do that. well good luck and continue writing!~VALERIE~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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