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branden726
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0 posted 2001-01-24 03:11 PM


My love for you is true,
The feelings i have for you are real,
The knowing that i love you is so great,
The passion we feel when our body embrace,
Me feeling your arms around me,
So sweet, So passionate your kiss was,
From the beginning i knew it was love,
You touch me in a way no one else has,
Yes My love for you is unbearable,
I cant take i have to let it out,
Tell you my feelings,
Let you know how i feel,
Here it goes my feelings about you,
I love you,
I want you,
I need you,
Or else i am just a silly fool.

P.S. I see a lot of new names around here and well i havent been here in a while but i would just like to let you guys know that passions is a great place and welcome and well guess what guys IM BACK for good!!!


"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"



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LoveBug
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1 posted 2001-01-24 04:28 PM


It's good to see you here at Passions again! This is a great poem. The feelings come through really well. Thanks for sharing. Can't wait to see more!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



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2 posted 2001-01-24 05:12 PM


well welcome back i was wondering where you went, well welcome back. and i changed my name it used to be mikeykrzy well jsut fyi
and i loved the poem and i hope that everything works out

somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

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3 posted 2001-01-24 07:35 PM


Sweet poem branden, welcome back!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2001-01-24 09:10 PM


It's so good to see you Branden ... I was wondering where you'd wandered off to! This is a wonderful entry back into the forums ... welcome back!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

sweetstuff101
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5 posted 2001-01-24 09:22 PM


Excellent job on this one, Branden! I love it! So sweet too!! You are an excellent poet, and don't ever think other wise lol! Great job, keep postin!

Much Luv,  
  ~*~SweetStuff~*~


How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it????


Lakewalker
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6 posted 2001-01-24 11:01 PM


Hey Branden, glad to see you back, nice job on the poem

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Allysa
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7 posted 2001-01-25 08:15 AM


Hey!!!!!!!! Long time no see!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am exclamation mark crazed!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't mind me!!!!!!!!!!! Well, byes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad.


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8 posted 2001-01-25 06:05 PM


Good to see you again Branden
great start at posting again
make sure you really are back for good  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



jeremydraul
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9 posted 2001-01-25 10:41 PM


ooohhh... still have that sincerity in your writing
i think thats what i like most about your work
theyre always about love, which enlightens my day... even my nights..
great to see you bud

~JDR

"Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood

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