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litle_krazy_poet
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since 2001-01-17
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0 posted 2001-01-24 12:54 PM


i sit
in my room
computer on
tv on
emotions off
thoughs flowing
writers block
got to flock
to my place
look at the face
one i love
like a dove
flies away
i cry today
i need to fly away.


i'm really drpresse


somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

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anonymousfemale
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1 posted 2001-01-24 08:09 AM


A great poem however no one deserves to feel depressed. So if you are going to do anything and I mean ANYTHING my email is: shadowchaser46@hotmail.com and I want you to email me immediately.

~AF~

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."
Buddha

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-01-24 03:07 PM


nice one here.
get well!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Jenn Cirrincione
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3 posted 2001-01-24 06:06 PM


Good poem.
I can relate to feeling sad. Even really, really sad. It's hard when people just expect you to be happy all of the time, sometimes life sux. However, you need to look for the future, it will eventually look brighter.
xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??


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4 posted 2001-01-25 04:19 PM


I do hope you start feeling better.

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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