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litle_krazy_poet
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since 2001-01-17
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0 posted 2001-01-24 12:37 PM


tv
bed
door
computer
gutiar
drums
dresser
bored
light
dad
yell
stand
yell
scream
hit
kick
brake
cry
cry
cry
cry
cry
cry
leve

i'm depressed this is not why


somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

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anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
1 posted 2001-01-24 10:22 AM


Krazy every time I come in here now I immediately look for some of your poetry because in simple words and a small time frame, you can express so much. I am really beginning to get attached to your work.  

~AF~

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."
Buddha

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-01-24 03:00 PM


nice one here. Sorry about you being depressed. Seems like everybody likes Acid's style.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Jenn Cirrincione
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3 posted 2001-01-24 06:09 PM


You know, I do like your poetry. So few words, and you can express your emotions well. Sometimes you just need to get your feelings out.  
xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??


litle_krazy_poet
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since 2001-01-17
Posts 71

4 posted 2001-01-25 12:17 PM


AF: thanks for that to tell you the truth i look forword to reading your poems i can really relate to them. well thanks for the comment

Dopy: ok about P.O.A this is my insparition i didn't read his stuff untill everyone has been telling me about him

Jenn: Thanks for that and i just write poetry
and thanks


somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

IsGona
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since 2000-07-14
Posts 723

5 posted 2001-01-25 01:37 PM


Wow.  I agree.  I'm really getting to like your stuff.  I think you have a unique ability.  But uhhh your little icon thingy... That scares me!!!  might want to consider a new one... lol
Nice work
~Jason

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~


sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
6 posted 2001-01-25 04:04 PM


Being depressed is no fun   ...I would know...a lil too well. Your poem was really great tho. You say so much in so little...I don't know it's just cool. Well great job, keep writing!

Luv Always,  
  Priscilla
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How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it????



[This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 01-25-2001).]

Acies
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Twilight Zone
7 posted 2001-01-26 12:23 PM


nobody said growing up is easy
life in general is not easy
the thing is, you must stay strong
keep that head up high  
thanks for sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Fearless_Angel
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 57
Calgary, AB Canada
8 posted 2001-01-26 12:49 PM


Hey there...
    I know you won't believe me when I say this, but look I know exactly how you feel. Although I don't your situation, I feel your pain. I'm going through a bad depression right now too and have to see a counsilor every week and I alwayz mentally slam the door in his face because I think what the f**k does he know about me. Why does he suddenly care so much? But I do realize that life is a gift, and no matter how down you feel, there will alwayz be some good things to live for even if it sometimes doesn't feel like it. I'd like to try and help you and maybe we can survive this togehter...miah ICQ# is 64399384 so gimme an "uh-oh" aiight? Or my e-mail is Fearless_Angel@hotmail.com so drop me a couple of lines...Thankz, best of luck.
Lotsa Love,
Angel
xoxoxo



"Take care and remember a certain innocent lil' Angel will alwayz be there for you..."

Fearless_Angel
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 57
Calgary, AB Canada
9 posted 2001-01-26 12:50 PM


Hey there...
    I know you won't believe me when I say this, but look I know exactly how you feel. Although I don't your situation, I feel your pain. I'm going through a bad depression right now too and have to see a counsilor every week and I alwayz mentally slam the door in his face because I think what the f**k does he know about me. Why does he suddenly care so much? But I do realize that life is a gift, and no matter how down you feel, there will alwayz be some good things to live for even if it sometimes doesn't feel like it. If you ever want to talk about it, (maybe we can survive this togehter...)miah ICQ# is 64399384 so gimme an "uh-oh" aiight? Or my e-mail is Fearless_Angel@hotmail.com so drop me a couple of lines...Kewl style, keep writing.
Thankz, best of luck.
Lotsa Love,
Angel
xoxoxo



"Take care and remember a certain innocent lil' Angel will alwayz be there for you..."

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