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Teen Poetry #4

Now it is Personal

litle_krazy_poet
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since 2001-01-17

Posts 71

0 posted 2001-01-23 09:43 PM

this is a poem about when the girl i love got hit by a guy.

i walk down the street
with cold dark everywhere
streetlight in front of me
i step into the glowing circle
i feel the warmth of the light
and then it's gone
when i was at your house
you never told me what was wrong
i just sat there
watching you cry
and messing up your hair
i sputtered out why
and looking up at me
with your brused face
i don't know why he hit you
but he won't get away
and now as i'm standing outside of his window
this will one end for him in the hospital

somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-01-23 09:56 PM

Ooo there is nothing more when you get a guy so pathetic and spineless that he has to hit a girl. Great display of emotion krazy. However, if you do feel that you must seek revenge on this fella, do so in a way that you don't get caught by the cops.

~AF~

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."
Buddha

litle_krazy_poet
Member

since 2001-01-17

Posts 71

2 posted 2001-01-23 11:25 PM

well i really thought that more people would reply but tyhanks AF: and it is to late

somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

3 posted 2001-01-24 12:14 PM

this was a good poem! why do guys always have to act all marcho

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-01-24 02:57 PM

Great poem here.....shows you care.

Katherine.....all guys don't act macho. I really don't think this is an act of being macho, i think it's him caring and trying to protect his friend.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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