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litle_krazy_poet
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0 posted 2001-01-23 09:24 PM


this poem is about a girl that is in one of my classes and what she does


you tease me
all you do is tease me
you say you want to please me
but all you do is tease me
you pinch me on the butt
you give me these looks
and give me these sings
you do it all the time
i just can't stand it
and when i get close
you push me away
and i love
i guess you can stay


somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-01-23 09:27 PM


Yea I know how it is to be teased like that. Good poem in describing this feeling. Sometimes teasing is good, and sometimes bad.
But wow......some women tease so good. haha



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

ThyWizard
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2 posted 2001-01-23 09:32 PM


Not all teasing is bad, there's an enjoyable level of teasing where it's tolerable and cute, but it's not like the teasing in your piece.  Good piece though, good show of emotions and flow of words.

" How can i feel if i can't breathe..."
- Godsmack

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3 posted 2001-01-24 06:12 PM


Thru time, I'd learned to hate these games
But still, this is the type that doesn't hurt
This piece made my day a bit better
thanks

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Greeneyes617
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4 posted 2001-01-24 06:31 PM


Whats wrong with being a tease???     Anyways, good poem....
sweetstuff101
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5 posted 2001-01-24 07:15 PM


doesn't it suck when ppl play wit you like that?? I never understood why people do. *sighs* oh well....ur poem was really great! Good job, keep writing!!

Love,  
  ~*~SweetStuff~*~


How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it????


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6 posted 2001-01-24 08:52 PM


God!!!! I know guys that have done that kind of stuff to me uck... men are just as terrible!!
I've learned that if you make yourself a challenge, and steer clear like you don't want them, they try harder, then THEY are forced to come after YOU.   hehehe I LOVE JUSTICE!

xoxo
Jenn
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"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??



[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 01-24-2001).]

IsGona
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7 posted 2001-01-24 10:55 PM


I really like this.  The way these words are written and placed, your emotion comes across clear.  Very well done
~Jason

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