Lies amounting to confession This will be his final session Confusing all his lies But the truth can be seen in his eyes He can't even realize his own emotions With the lies founding all his devotions Having faith in the human race Means nothing looking into his face The lies backing his existence Are rising up in resistance
I really seem to be slipping up on my work lately, it's turning out worse than I thought it would in the first place, which is bad because I am the coldest cruelest critic of my work there is...
Any feedback would be welcom.
[This message has been edited by Poet on Acid (edited 01-23-2001).]
I can't compare to previous quality as i haven't read any of your other work, but all in all i don't think this was bad. It had a rather unique undertone to it and as short as it was had a nice amount of depth to it, i look forward to reading more from you
" How can i feel if i can't breathe..." - Godsmack