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princess^sarah
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0 posted 2001-01-23 03:06 AM


i remember the day we found you,
you looked so sad and lonely
i picked you up and took you home
and loved and cared for you.

you were with me
through the good and the bad times
always there to cuddle with
when i was down.

the day you died,
i cried and cried
i felt as if
my life had ended.

i love you poochie and i always will.


i hope u like this dedicationg to my sweet loveable poochie

© Copyright 2001 sarah alford - All Rights Reserved
anonymousfemale
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1 posted 2001-01-23 03:37 AM


Aww princess, this is so sad. I hate it when you have become so close to a family pet that it gets taken away from you. I'm sure that if your dog was able to read, he/she would have loved it.  

~AF~

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."
Buddha

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-01-23 06:13 AM


This was sweet Princess Sarah ... I've written a lot of poems about my dogs too ... they really do become such a part of the family, this is a lovely tribute.

Best wishes and hugs to you,
/Kit

Allan Riverwood
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3 posted 2001-01-23 08:59 AM


I don't think you ever told me about this.
It's so sad.  What a beautiful tribute.
-Allan

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4 posted 2001-01-23 04:25 PM


I feel your pain. I have been through this. Very painful thing to go through. Hope you healed well. Nice tribute.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-01-24 10:24 AM


very sweet tribute to you pal poochie
remember, he's not a dog to you anymore, he's your pal  
I remember the first time I had a pet
He was only a pup, maybe 1 month old
For some reason he got out into the garage
Well, my uncle was backing out one of the cars and the puppy was by the tires  
That devastated me...........

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



litle_krazy_poet
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6 posted 2001-01-24 06:22 PM


sarah this is a grate decation to a grate friend i hope you feel better

somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

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