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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
this is how i used to be w/ weand my ex and me and her still want it that way. but her dad! so we talk so we walk only talking only walking and i don't want to be anywhere else i say i love you and you love me this is the way it should be  somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I needed to read this right now... at this point in my life... This is very signifigant to me. Thanks for sharing. What a simple, and powerful, definition of love. -Allan |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ahh yes. Love. Its a rather spawnful thing in my opinion.  All the same, this is a lovely poem about the simplicity of love. It's nicely written and don't worry about the parents - they are always a pain in the butt. *L*  ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here. Sorry it had to be that way. Kinda like Romeo and Juliet.....just don't go doing what they did.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
thanks all Allan: you welcome and i hope that this start to look yup for you. AF: ya parents will always be a pain in the butt espically on that subject. Dopy: i'm happy to say that the girl that i lost. me and her are back together. somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
it was almost like a pyramid, or stepping process (what I got from the style and form). Very caring and somplistic words can go a long way, thanks for sharing... best wishes ~JDR "Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Don't you just love what love does for someone Even the most simple things mean a lot You have expressed this so well thanks for the read keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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