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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
You were the one I's always care for The one that I Would live and die for You were the one That I loved The only one that I thought of You were the one That broke my heart And also the one Who tore it apart You were the one that played games with my mind And the one that Made me hate your kind You are the one I left behind You are the one I won't bring to mind You are the one That makes me cry Every single day and night *~*Hope is a walking dream*~* *~*Don't take life too seriosly~~~you'll never get out alive*~* |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Sweety, this guy sounds like a real bum and to leave you feeling this way, he obviously didn't care too much about the state of your heart. You have got to remember that there are people out there (maybe I should be telling myself this too...  ) who do care about the state they leave you in. Life is eternal so live because you are not! You have got a lifetime to find the right person.Happy Hunting. ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Steph, this is REALLY REALLY good!!! i don't know how you can always be telling me you are a horrible poet, and then write stuff like this. Well NEwaze, I'm not sure who this poem is about...but I think I can narrow it down to a few lol. Well great job on this one, Keep ip up! Luv Alwayz & forever, Priscilla How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well I'm sorry you had to go through this. It seems that those we love most are also the ones that hurt us most....and this is natural considering we get extremely vulnerable with that person. Don't hate all men.........just most hehe. Nice one here, you expressed yourself well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nice. but you dont have to hate all men. i mean, im a guy. and well i did nothing. ahh hate them if ya want, its just a mistake thats all. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Thanx everyone..I really didn't think that it was good...I found it last night when I was cleaning my room...I don't hate all guys just some!!! At that moment I hated guys cause if what he did...but I am over it now!!! Well thanx again!!! Buh bye *~*Hope is a walking dream*~* *~*Don't take life too seriosly~~~you'll never get out alive*~* |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
PLeaseeee Reply ppl!!!!! Thanx *~*Hope is a walking dream*~* *~*Don't take life too seriosly~~~you'll never get out alive*~* |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
great poem!!! i can't belive what we go through cause of guys! hope you're ok!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
sorry I'm late in replying I do agree with anonymous we all have to go thru this game i guess that's part of life and growing up hope you start feeling better nice to see you and sweetstuff back again  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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