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Swords Of Betrayal
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Swords Of Betrayal |
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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
Swords Of Decit Group Huddle Line Battle Clash Stab Jab Blood Mud Death Struggle Swing Spatter Red Rest Fight Two Aproch Fight Friend Enemy Both Why Back Front Stop Fall Die End Why did you betray me my friend? _________________________________ Hope you liked that one boys and girls. Anyway yeah I saw Allan do somethin like that on here and thought it might be interesting to try it... not sure if I even like this one... but... yeah... Why are all my peoms so darned depressing? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this came out very well. A good try at this style for yer first time. very nice.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
if only p.o.a. were here... San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
That's it, I'm emailing him. We miss that guy. Nice poem Dave. |
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