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jytree
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0 posted 2001-01-22 04:59 PM


Romancing the stars,
kissing the sky,
Never settling down,
no more goodbyes,
For I flow beyond the edge of time and space,
Waiting for the call before I take my place,

Laying in a field of endless dreams,
Where nothing or no one is as they seem,
Running into the arms of the one I love,
Uniting with her as we become as a dove,

With love on my lips,
And a endless goodbye,
I gather my strength and take to the skies,
Fly fast,
Fly free,
Never any want,
Never any need,

Taking my place among the stars,
For I am the moon giving light,
I am the one you pray to when you ask for might,
I am the one when you ennd a friend,
And I am the one that will stick with you until the end,

I am a dreamer yes indeed,
I am one that the sons has set free,
one more glance at the stars,
Before I wake and recive my daily scars.



Love is pure in it's top form,
But with out romance love is not born


© Copyright 2001 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
jytree
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1 posted 2001-01-22 05:01 PM


I'm back

Love is pure in it's top form,
But with out romance love is not born


MidnightMaverick
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2 posted 2001-01-22 05:09 PM


nice piece of work. I like how it flows. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Midnight Maverick

jytree
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3 posted 2001-01-22 06:59 PM


thanks mavrick it is good to know I can still write where people still like them

Love is pure in it's top form,
But with out romance love is not born


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4 posted 2001-01-22 07:06 PM


Wow this was a nice one jytree. I liked it very much. My fav from you so far!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jytree
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5 posted 2001-01-22 10:24 PM


HEY Good to hear from you my friend I am glad you like it because I will probually never write one like it again maybe!

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



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6 posted 2001-01-26 03:43 PM


   Hello there! Welcome back. I really liked the poem, it had some really good word choices. So beautiful, so beautiful....
    ~Carly

sweetstuff101
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7 posted 2001-01-26 05:10 PM


very nice! Tres Bien! (sorry I been taking French!) well ur poem was awesome, I really like it! It flows well! Keep up the great work!

Much Luv,  
  ~*~SweetStuff~*~


How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it????


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8 posted 2001-01-26 05:17 PM


probably the best poem I've read today
wow, i don't know how i missed this one
thanks to sweetstuff, she brought it back up
this is beautiful
thanks for the read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Greeneyes617
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9 posted 2001-01-26 05:17 PM


GREAT poem. I like it. Its about time you start posting again, mister!  
LyL,
Malinda

jytree
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10 posted 2001-01-26 08:54 PM


thanks everyone yes I am gald I can still write after I looooooooooooooong vacation..


Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



sweetypie5
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11 posted 2001-01-27 01:23 AM


WOW that was really good!!! It flowed well and it was really sweet!!! Keep writing!!! I will be looking for more of ur poetry!!!
~LOVE~

*~*S*T*E*P*H*A*N*I*E*~*


*~*Hope is a walking dream*~*

*~*Don't take life too seriosly~~~you'll never get out alive*~*



katherine
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12 posted 2001-01-27 06:24 AM


All i can say is WOW!
jytree
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13 posted 2001-01-27 04:37 PM


thanks


Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



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14 posted 2001-01-28 12:41 PM


This was an AMAZING poem!!!! Keep it up!
jytree
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15 posted 2001-01-28 08:52 PM


thanks everyone i would of never imanged it to do so well

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



~*Buffy Summers*~
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16 posted 2001-01-28 11:03 PM


I loved your poem... WOW your really good at explaining your thoughts and emotions... I wish my dreams are like that every night...If you ever wanna talk E-mail me at buffysummers772000@hotmail.com

quote:
fear leads to anger~anger leads to hate~hate leads to death and death leads to the innocent.


Kim Rayann

TrueLUV
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17 posted 2001-01-28 11:10 PM


Great poem I got see the journey of flight
Hope to see much more

[This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 01-28-2001).]

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