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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-01-21 05:09 PM


For the past 5 months,
You’ve always been there for me.
I knew I could count on you,
To listen and help me out.
Michael, you’ve been great
And I thank you for that.
Thank you for wiping away my tears,
And giving me those healing kisses of yours.
You’ve proven time and time again,
What you hold in your heart.
You are so great to me,
And I hope that’ll always be.
I love you, Michael!!!



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1 posted 2001-01-21 05:23 PM


What happened to Justin??

xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??


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2 posted 2001-01-21 05:39 PM


hehe...Jenn...this is a lil bit of a long story   ill wait till i have a few more replies to expalin  

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3 posted 2001-01-21 06:22 PM


i was gonna sk the same question

What happened to Justin?

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4 posted 2001-01-21 06:43 PM


what happened to Justin?!
Regina
btw good poem

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5 posted 2001-01-21 06:54 PM


Michael is obviously her baby brother or a friend of hers or something.........Justin couldn't have gone out that easily without countless depressing poems by tamma.




I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 2001-01-21 09:28 PM


Ahhh, Dopey, that is what I was thinking.... but you never know.
Tamma, explain now??
xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??


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7 posted 2001-01-21 09:40 PM


It's nice to have someone
I'm glad you do
Hope Michael helps you through
the unthinkable times
and the wonderful ones too
Best of luck to the both of you

and I think everyone wants
an explanation...I guess I too
am curious. Do tell.

~*~Jessica~*~


*Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference*



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8 posted 2001-01-21 09:54 PM


lol im w/ everyone else..what happened to justin??

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9 posted 2001-01-22 07:54 AM


Ahhh...What Happened to Justin? Nothing happened to Justin...He's the greatest guy to walk into my life...but nobody has guessed right yet...Keep goin'  


~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~


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10 posted 2001-01-22 09:03 AM


Michael could be a relative, or a friend...
Or come to think of it...
Michael could be a pet?
Or even a metaphor...?
Tough to say... Michael could be anything...
Thanks for another mystery, Tamma...
but my guess is Michael is your dog.
Oh... the Five Months thing has to be a hint...
it just HAS to be...

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11 posted 2001-01-22 09:10 AM


Hehehehe....
Allan..."Michael" is a human...and you're right, the 5 months is supposed to be a clue...and "Michael" isn't his first name. I love him very much, and I'm being honest when I say that nothing has happened, Justin and I are still goin' good. I'm just having fun with this lil puzzle!

          

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~
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[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 01-22-2001).]

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12 posted 2001-01-22 11:09 AM


Well I think you gave it away.  Michael is Justin's middle name.  Nice poem tamma.
~Jason

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I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

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13 posted 2001-01-22 11:57 AM


In the words of Homer Simpson D'OH Guess my clues were a lil too obvious  

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14 posted 2001-01-22 02:48 PM


How I hate mysteries.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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15 posted 2001-01-22 02:51 PM


i agree.
misteries suck.


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

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16 posted 2001-01-23 03:34 PM


I'm glad I read this kinda late, I didn't have  a clue who Michael was until you said that it wasn't a first name.  I figured it out then.  Nice job on the poem.

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17 posted 2001-01-23 04:19 PM


You suck... !
It took you like forever and a day to tell us about Micheal... however you definitly gave it away w/ the middle name thing.
xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??


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18 posted 2001-01-23 07:26 PM


Hehehehehehe...But it was soooo much fun.     I've called him Michael pretty much from the day we got together, cause thats what his family calls him. Even most of the other REDNECKS call him that. Anyways...Thanks for all the comments, and guesses    


   ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~    
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19 posted 2001-01-23 08:28 PM


Wow, I like the way you can incorperate a hidden meaning into the poem.  It is very well written too.  I havent read any of the ones about "Justin"  but I think Im going to go look them up.  If they are as good as this one, they should be great!
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