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Two Seperate Ropes
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Two Seperate Ropes |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Two Seperate Ropes: One rope born to be, Yet cut in seperate two. Torn apart for eternity. Only the wind of fate knew. Years unknown that went slowly Passed along times ways. The two ropes felt lonely, Yet another awful day.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
Interesting idea... well written... although if there was a main idea in place... it went flying past my head...nearly hit me in the eye though... stupid idea... should learn how to drive... those young ideas... got no respect for their elders... |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
ok...this went WAYYYY over my head...I'm goin back to bed www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
(The Lost Supertone trys to Grab the idea that none of them seem to grasp) [This message has been edited by acire (edited 01-23-2001).] |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
haha. tamma, you ok? hahahaha. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
no, not really...ive been unconsious for 2 days now...now, what have i missed? www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one seems like it could be said about a lot of things, I think. Nice job on it Dopey, keep them coming. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was going to be easy enough for you all to get. I guess not. Nobody seemed to ask for an explanation so I won't give one. But thanks for the replies everyone. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Dopes.....please explain a bit...thanks I have a feeling that this is based on your relationsip with your ex but, i might be wrong I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was tres triste. but very good. your meaning are never obvious you serioulsy just cant scan any of your poetry, you have to literally read it. very amazing. regina |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Seems to me the "rope" represents a person or people that were either seperated at birth or were supposed to be united but never were.. and only fate knew what was going on.. because neither of the two knew of one another... If Im right, great... but the possibilities of it are slim I really liked this, it was so deep and hard to perceive... great one my friend... ~JDR "Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Ok....so here's the explanation Acire wanted: One rope born to be, Yet cut in seperate two. OK so there's this one rope symbolizing a bond, yet...the bond breaks in two. Torn apart for eternity. Only the wind of fate knew. So the bond breaks forever, which seems obivous due to the word ETERNITY, and then i'm saying that only fate knew what would happen to the rope....Whether it'd come back together or stay apart. This obviously symbolizes some sort of RELATIONSHIP, right? Yes. Years unknown that went slowly Passed along times ways. Ok so the years of waiting went slow and the rope piece is just sitting there yearning to be joined back with the other piece. The two ropes felt lonely, Yet another awful day. The conclusion states that the two pieces of the rope never joined. They were not whole without the other and yet another awful day to endure until the POSSIBLE join. So yea, pretty depressing. Kind of a there-is-no-hope-poem. Oh well. there you go acire! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Dopey~ Great poem, and i am glaid i saw this late knowing me i wouldnt have gotten it. Keep up the wonderful work |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
How did I ever miss this one? Hmm... it's great. And hey, I even got an explanation. Bonus. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
agggh. I hate being late. See now I can't make my analysis and then have you tell me how wrong I am... well I'm going to tell you what I got from this poem before I read your explanation anyhow. I thought this poem was about destiny. Which actually totally kills the "no hope theme" Like how ppl say "there's a Mr/Mrs right for every one." We are born with this bond to this person that we never met, but once we do we finally be come whole. It's hard to explain what I mean, but I think if you take what I've written here, compare it to your poem, that you will understand what I thought this was about. But of course we all know that's wrong since you already explained it... hehe nice one dopey keep it up Jason To steal ideas from one person is plagiarism; to steal from many is research The early bird may get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese |
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