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Allan Riverwood
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0 posted 2001-01-21 01:36 AM


miles and miles apart
i smile despite all my tears
still we share the sky

© Copyright 2001 Brian James Lee - All Rights Reserved
jeremydraul
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1 posted 2001-01-21 01:39 AM


"love is in the air"
na na na na...
another sweeeeeeeeet senryu... she'll melt melt melt...
loved it!

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

The Lost Supertone
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2 posted 2001-01-21 01:40 AM


Such a hopeless romantic... wait... are you?  HOW COME I WASN"T INFORMED?
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3 posted 2001-01-21 02:23 AM


This was a nice one allan.

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I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

IsGona
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4 posted 2001-01-21 02:26 AM


Wow been a while since I been to this place... only got time to read a few... this was great.  I too love the idea that no matter how far away someone is we can look up at the same sun or same moon, unless of course he/she is on another planet... Then that would be different.    Good one
~Jason

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

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5 posted 2001-01-21 10:22 AM


Allan, I just had to laugh at this for personal reasons.*smiling  Wonderful senryu
you give the reader the true meaning of all this very well. It has truly touched my heart keep posting and.....keep writting from your heart. ~Angel in Flight~

look forward,But forget not the past for it has brought you this far~by Allan and Amanda

Jenn Cirrincione
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6 posted 2001-01-21 03:53 PM


This was very pretty Allan.  
xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??


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7 posted 2001-01-22 05:32 PM


Yup, fantastic job

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8 posted 2001-01-23 05:38 PM


BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm giving you a standing ovation on this one
BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Ina
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9 posted 2001-01-23 05:56 PM


it was amazing. you know i adore your stuff.
she's a special girl.
regina

StarPryncess17
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10 posted 2001-01-23 06:02 PM


BEAUTIFUL!! Such deep sentiments here. Much enjoyed this one. Probably one of the best senryus I've ever seen. Thanks for sharing. ~*~Jessica~*~

*the expected escape is only a portal to true devine Hell...leave that door alone*

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