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anomaly187
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0 posted 2001-01-21 01:01 AM


down from Below came a DeFEANING ROAR!
had i broke the elastic plate barring me from the inside??!!
this hateful womb entrapement has been too much for me to stand.
I swear i will meet myself and greet myself on the other side!

Why does this parade of rats weep and weep and weep for me?
Is it because they are imaginary and no one is really celebrating?
Well why would i care, i've been gone too long
I've sunk below the muddy edge of existence to really feel alive!
..but in truth i've been watching your polished minds for all of time...

I'd call myself the king of the dirt, but that is much too generous..
i thought i was supposed to be celebrating, this mindlessness is endless...

Please!! PLease! won't you come and kiss me..
i haven't felt pleasure long enough to regain color..
I need some wine!!I need some wine!
..to get drunk on this happy occasion..

my attempts at celebration are useless!!
i came back for one reason!
Peter Pan told me i could fly, but to my surprise the loser lied!

So with all that said i'll just go to sleep..
i'm getting a little tired..
no more time to celebrate
I think it's time i was fired.



[This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 01-21-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-01-21 02:43 AM


Anomaly, I have missed you ever since you mysteriously vanished! Welcome back and I hope you stay here for a while. As you can see I am still here (unless this isn't me and I am not posting this, so in that case why are you still reading? go away).....This post was really great. I love your style and hope to see much more in the future.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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2 posted 2001-01-21 09:59 AM


Welcome back! This is a great way to let us all know you're here!  

(I had to edit your post for profanity, however. It's aganst our guidelines!)

I hope you're back to stay!  

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



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3 posted 2001-01-22 04:36 PM


good to see you back

excellent poem
a beautiful naration of feelings
we do have one thing to celebrate for,
you're back  

thanks for sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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4 posted 2001-01-23 09:11 PM


   Yeaaa!!! This kicked. Glad to see ya again, anomaly. I loved your work before, and I continue to do so.
    ~Carly

inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog...

jeremydraul
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5 posted 2001-01-23 09:15 PM


Hmm.. think this was the first time Ive ever read one of your poems...
Very unique I must say...kinda laughed when i read lovebug's reply... keep'em coming please

~JDR

"Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood

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