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Killing Me Softly
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Killing Me Softly |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I would do anything for you, To make you see a brighter day. I'd do the impossible, Just to take all your pain away. I've been there alone, By your side through it all. I was the one dedicated to lift u from darkness, If you happened to slip and fall. I love u with all my heart, I'll never love another in this way. No matter what shall happen between us, Forever implanted in my heart you will stay. Im the one your meant to be with, And soon this for yourself you will see. We're meant to be together, But just not right now is what kills me. |
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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
That's an amazeing poem... however me being a Christian, I kinda took it from another perspective. Because that is how God feels about all of us... course that's what you might have ment... so if it is then I think that's coo, but if it isn't... I'm gona give the poet somehting to think of (kidna reverse the role a bit.) |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
this is a great poem..it really illistrates how much you want to be together but then there is that wall between you...great work "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Wow.. supertone went out on a tangent.. but this poem has a lot of good ol' sentiments.. great job! ~JDR "Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here shugar.......like i said......you are a very talented love poem writer. Great.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Your words are so enchanting as said in one movie "oh, the tragedy of it all" simply beautiful sugarhigh i love it I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey chickster! Awesome poem. I know what you're talking about to. I love that title, "Killing Me Softly" I like instantly started singing that Foogees song or however u spell it im probably totally off lol oh well, i'll talk to you later babe  *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
gosh dang it! LOL sorry [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This was really good, I totally felt it. And DancinQueen I luv that song too. And did you know someone else sang it before the Fugees? I forget who, I think she was a singer from the 70's. hehehe xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Hey girl!!! It's been a long while. All I can say is that I have most definitely missed your work. Your piece was so touching. Keep up the wonderful writing. *Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference* |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thanx everyone for your replies!!!!!! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Roberta Flack... That's who did that so Killing me Softly... (I think, I just looked on Napster) But now that we got that piece of trivia out of the way. This was a great poem. I could really feel your desire to be with this person. Thanks for sharing ~Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Nice poem xShUgArHiGhx.....I like the title. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yeah, Jason, I think you're right. Thanks.... hehehexoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
really beautiful poem!!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thank you everyone for your replies i really appreciate you readin it...Thanks!!!! |
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