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NeverSayDie
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since 2001-01-18
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Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND

0 posted 2001-01-20 10:49 PM


The feeling that are from the heart
Will show your love and help you start

To show a fellow and a friend
How your friendship has began

With the help of words and signs
Your friends will help to ease your mind

Because when i trouble without a doubt
Your friends are awlays there to help

But if you think they will not care
Just wait a bit and they'll be there  

How do i know this to be true
From many time i have been blue


© Copyright 2001 NeverSayDie - All Rights Reserved
Virgil
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since 2000-12-29
Posts 43
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2001-01-20 11:05 PM


Nice poem, great message! I'm glad you have so much faith in your friends.

"By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee."

"I AM CANADIAN!!"

Dopey Dope
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2001-01-20 11:10 PM


Nice one here. Friendship, a key element to achieve true happiness.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
3 posted 2001-01-21 12:42 PM


You are very lucky to have such wonderful friends...great poem  
Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
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4 posted 2001-01-21 02:19 PM


Friends can be great to have around, great poem

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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The Lost Supertone
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since 2001-01-20
Posts 74
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada
5 posted 2001-01-21 02:33 PM


(The Lost Supertone plans out how to steal "neversaydie"'s friends so that they can make him feel better, unlike his friends that suggest he jump off a cliff)
Acies
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6 posted 2001-01-22 05:27 PM


it's nice to see that you are surrounded by people you can truly call friends
A most uplifting poem
Thanks for reminding me that yes, there are true friends out there  
again, thanks
keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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