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steve
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since 2000-08-15

Posts 9
Canada

0 posted 2001-01-20 09:10 PM

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You wonder why,
Your loved so dear,
By all which be,
That know your here.

You stand up strong,
Amongst the crowd,
Hold your head,
Above us all.

***

A far I am,
Watch I do,
Never near,
For fear of you.

I learnt you love,
I learnt you care,
Although it be,
Not widely shared.

***

Now it's hard to say,
Explain my cries,
It seems though so sad,
Peering in your eyes.

I wonder why,
Why i do.
What reason i have,
To love you.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-01-20 11:12 PM

Very good poem. I liked this one. Keep posting.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

2 posted 2001-01-20 11:39 PM

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!
this is really really good. hehehe
it has left me speechless
~Valerie~

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

3 posted 2001-01-21 12:40 PM

hey great poem..and good material subject..

"It's better to burn out then fade away"

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

4 posted 2001-01-21 11:13 AM

Wow this is really great....it reminds me of a few songs. Wow....dang...this is great.... good luck
Bel

DreamerGrl27
Member

since 2000-10-29

Posts 142

5 posted 2001-01-21 02:42 PM

I really like this one...I understand your situation and I hope everything works out okay...

The Lost Supertone
Member

since 2001-01-20

Posts 74
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

6 posted 2001-01-21 02:49 PM

WOW A LOVE POEM THAT I LIKED!!!!

Sorry but most of them anoy the heck out of me, I realized it was one half way through and by that point I liked it! Man we need to have a party, I'll go get some steamers, who wants to pick up the cake?

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-01-22 03:01 PM

This was such an amazing poem...you are such a talented writer. Great poem and keep them comin!

litle_krazy_poet
Member

since 2001-01-17

Posts 71

8 posted 2001-01-22 03:46 PM

i really like this poem i went through something like this last year
well keep posting

somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-01-22 09:06 PM

Now that was really good!!!

"I learnt you love,
I learnt you care,
Although it be,
Not widely shared."

amazing...simply amazing
keep em coming

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

10 posted 2001-01-24 05:35 PM

Nada Surf anyone???
Too bad they were one hit wonders, that was a cool song!!
Anyway,

Great poem.... keep 'em coming.

xoxo
Jenn

"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

11 posted 2001-01-24 08:37 PM

this poem it great! i love it.

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

12 posted 2001-02-17 09:11 PM

I also loved it!! It's wonderful! I really cna't htink of anything to say! but it's great!

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

13 posted 2001-02-18 11:36 AM

I read this again and just thought i should bump up. It's such a good poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

14 posted 2001-02-18 05:30 PM

oh I am speechless......This is such a strong meaningful poem I can hardly reply. Amazing just totally and absolutly astonishing poem. Wonderful work

The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny

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