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Angel in Flight
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0 posted 2001-01-20 06:18 PM


Look at me I shout in the sky!!!
Put me down and I’ll promise
I’ll fly!

Laugh at me and I’ll smile at you.
Hurt me and I’ll grow strong because of what you do.

Tease me and I’ll laugh because you don’t see.
that you will never be as spiritually strong as me!

When YOU fall down I’ll lift YOU up high!
You can't do it yourself and I’ll tell you why;

For all the times you hurt me so,
put me down,and laughed I took another blow.

And for every time you have teased,
I grew stronger and my troubles went
at easy.

Now you no one has made you cry.
Make you feel like you wish to die.
Now me ,myself, I’ve felt that way...
and I tell you now................................................ thank you for all of
those mean things you say!!

(I love you Regina even though I dont know you that well just wanted you to know that I truly Do)
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look forward,But forget not the past for it has brought you this far~by Allan and Amanda


[This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-20-2001).]

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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-01-20 11:06 PM


Nice tribute to regina. I'm sure she'll appreciate it greatly.
If she doesn't, we can all throw coconuts at her.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anomaly187
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2 posted 2001-01-21 12:43 PM


well since i don't know who regina is i am just going to say that it was a great poem.

"It's better to burn out then fade away"


Lakewalker
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3 posted 2001-01-21 02:22 PM


Great job of saying this in a poem!!!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Allan Riverwood
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4 posted 2001-01-21 02:34 PM


A lot is being said in this piece, Amanda.
I think that we could all learn something by reading this.
As for Regina, I certainly do hope that she does read this and gets something out of it.
We all need to emerge stronger.
-Allan

The Lost Supertone
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5 posted 2001-01-21 02:37 PM


(The Lost Supertone readys his coconut)

yeah that was a nice poem.  I personaly have had a lot of people be real jerks to me.  So now when more of them come, before I would have probably just crawled into the featal position and rocked back and forth, but since I have gone through the other people I can jus think... man these guys are just plain redundant.  I mean eventually your dulled by it... while I dont' think that anyone should ever have a reason to become dulled to pain like that.  I do realize that it happens, and it can be a gift in disguse, although I would NEVER thank the people that have hurt me.

But I do think this is a good poem.

Ina
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6 posted 2001-01-21 06:19 PM


Javier!!!if u throw one coconut at me you r going to regret it....u will never win!!!lol
*bow*
o yeah i won

amanda thank you for the poem so much
it was beautiful, ALlan told me about it amaizng, thank u im in tears
Regina

[This message has been edited by Ina (edited 01-22-2001).]

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7 posted 2001-01-22 05:48 PM


i see that you've just made someone feel special and that's good
you do have a beautiful heart Amanda
keep posting

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Angel in Flight
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8 posted 2001-01-27 01:07 PM


lol @ dopey

Allan~ You are very true to what you have said, and hopefully everyone will learn "to grow strong" and maybe this time from the heart.

Regina~ I am hapoy to have made you feel just a little better. Grow strong my friend and fight from the heart.

Acrie~ Thank you for the smile

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