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Fake It (song) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: The second line is supposed to be like that. Sounds like "nothingness", but hey......IT'S NOT! So HA! Fake it: A simple lie that would not break. The nothing is you are. The star dust pills would always make You vomit out steel bars. Can you fake it anymore? Entrails of hell desire you. Can you fake it anymore? Worrying, but damn you're turning blue. Can you fake it anymore? You know nothing, I know you. Can you fake it anymore? This is not all you can do. Where's your clothes that you wore In sadness, love, and stuff. Shattered hamper that you bore. This is about enough. Wicked nature on natural high. Learn to beware yourself. Boy you're living a simple lie. The life you must delve. Can you fake it anymore? Take a drink of this potion. Can you fake it anymore? Faking all of your emotion. Can you fake it anymore? The wrath of a wrong notion. Can you fake it anymore? Move on boy, you got the token. Hope and joy can follow until The end beginnings days. Secretly hide from star dust pills To say today always x4  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
You know I adore your songs. This is no exception. Nice one, as always. :.) Vreni |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this is probably my favorite song from you DD... the whole faking act is really intriguing.. great one buddy. ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
your songs are very good. I particulary liked this one. well good job. Regina |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Woah, wonderfully good job on this song! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey Javi, Carly and Susanna liked this lotssss....Now let us read it over and over so to comprehend its greatness... ~C inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
hey, this was great. as usual lol but hey i don't got much to say, so i'll chat with ya on ICQ lol  Valerie *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
yes i'm really back for a short stay...heh..remember me?...although i haven't seen your other songs i definately know this is just yet another of your masterful writing skills i've witnessed from the beginning at passions...heh well i look forward to re-reading your posts.. "It's better to burn out then fade away" |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Ugh!! You have so much talent you make me SICK!! This is really great, I love your songs Bel |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
1. take your guitar  2. sing to the computer mic and make a wave file 3. convert it into an mp3 file --- you can do this with music match jukebox 4. put it on the net 5. give me a link to it so i can download it thanks I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow.......either Acire is sick of reading my songs and wants to hear it.......or he just really likes this one. Well see, I'm still working on it. I usually write lyrics, and then add the music to it. I still have to compose it first haha.....Give it time......Thanks for the interest though. This song is going to take a while. I already know it's going to need a bass line, and 2 guitars....obviously drums, but hey.....i don't do drums. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Silver Butterfly Junior Member
since 2001-03-13
Posts 42Between here and the end |
Your "star dust pill" line was really cool, but the "vomiting steel bars" I did not understand.... at all. |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I play guitar! I'm sort of talented! And I can sing! Just thought you might like to know. Ya know, you've written enough songs that you could make a cd. It would be awesome! Id want a copy! Maybe I should make a cd too! I know some ppl that do bass, and a drummer (sort of. He happens to hate me with a passion, but that's not the point) ANyways, awesome song. G2G, bye! I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Your writing simply amazes me... GREAT job. Everything else has said what I would want to... so ditto to everyone else Awesome job, Dopes.--Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Thanks all......I write the lyrics of all these songs and I've just started to compose the music for some of them. Eventually I'll have a complete band and I'll be able to put them on Cd.....but that'll take some years of work hehe. thanks for reading though!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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