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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
In bleakest hour, Darkest thoughts creep Across mind's blind eye... A ray of light The moon shines down An angel takes flight Hearts soar Rising with the angel A love greater than dispair... "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely DragonFang! Beautifully stated, with such an uplifting ending, very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
hey there! good stuff! i haven't seen any work from you lately, of course i haven't been around here lately anyway  but regardless, good job on this one! i always love reading your posts!pharon [This message has been edited by pharon (edited 01-19-2001).] |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
~kit~ I wrote it about my gf, who always seems to bring my spirits up when I'm in one of my dismal moods... and also seems to keep me from going into dismal moods more often than not. ~pharon~ Well, it may also be becuase I haven't been around very much either until about a week or so ago when I suddenly found myself with more time than I had anything to do with (which is amazing since I spend a lot of time w/ my gf, more than I should perhaps... nah, impossible ) Anyway, I'm quite glad that you enjoy my work, really uplifting to know."Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a nice one. I liked this one. very good last time to end it with a mood of positivity.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great poem, and what a great thing to be able to write about "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is a great way of showing your respect for what someone does for you. Hope you've shown her this piece welcome back keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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