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lilpoet
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since 2000-12-30

Posts 55
Dallas,Tx

0 posted 2001-01-18 09:53 PM

I wish you were here
I need a geni and a lamp
Who will make you appear
Then I'll wish for us to be alone
To give us time to find our way home
Two people in love
The wish we've recived by GOD above
Now I only have one wish left to spare
Somthing we both can share
Geni, I wish for us to never be apart
He's my true love, I can feel it in my heart
But then I guess I don't need a geni
To make my wish come true
Cause I'm so happy
Just being with you

~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

1 posted 2001-01-18 10:08 PM

a lot of romanticism in this
hope your wish comes true

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

2 posted 2001-01-18 10:24 PM

aww this was cute

keep it up

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-01-18 10:54 PM

Very good on this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-01-19 10:42 AM

A genie would be nice, but it's unlikely. Sometimes it is best to do things for ourselves, rather than depend on a supernatural force.
I suppose that this is the message behind this poem, considering the last four lines.
And a great message it is.
-Allan

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2001-01-19 01:51 PM

I really love what you're saying here, it's so, so, romantic. Wonderful job on the poem!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

DreamerGrl27
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 142

6 posted 2001-01-19 11:50 PM

I liked this one...it was really cute. I liked the ending the best!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-01-20 05:08 PM

I woudl consider this as one of the most romantic poems I've read in the forum

"But then I guess I don't need a gennie
To make my wish come true
Cause I'm so happy
Just being with you"

Words that would melt anyones heart

great post and keep em coming

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2001-01-21 12:44 PM

The ending was very adorible but overall it was a very cute poem...keep em comin!!

GirlsBestFriend
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since 2000-12-27

Posts 71
Planet Earth

9 posted 2001-01-21 01:35 AM

great! lilpoet, I love this one so so much! please keep writing and posting for us. may I add it to my library and print it too??

~lotsa luv

"Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world"

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