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starryeyed999
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since 2001-03-05
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0 posted 2001-03-06 08:13 PM



Good friends are hard to find.
But I'm lucky, I found more than one.
Good friends help you through it all
The best times and the worst.
They do anything for you,
Even when it means risking everything of theirs.
Good friends mean a lot.
They mean the world -
and everything in between.
I want to thank you for being there,
For being a good friend to me.
We've laughed a lot, and cried a little.
Thats the way I like it, don't ever change.
Thank you for being the best friend I could have.

© Copyright 2001 starryeyed999 - All Rights Reserved
Ina
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since 2000-10-09
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Quebec, Canada
1 posted 2001-03-06 08:15 PM


awww........that was great. so nice and peaceful. great work.
Regina

Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-03-06 10:49 PM


Very good poem. I could see this getting you a raise, if you worked for Hallmark.
See you around.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan


keoni
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since 2000-10-16
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Up in the mountains in the NFC
3 posted 2001-03-07 10:19 AM


Nice. Good friends are hard to come by and even harder to hold on to. I have always felt this way. Very nice poem. You should show it to the friends that you are talking about.I'm sure they'd appreciate it.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

FallNTears
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since 2001-03-05
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4 posted 2001-03-07 02:46 PM


That is really good. I had to get my best friend over here to read it!

*Me*

*Having a nightmare is nothing compared to living one.*

Tears of Glass
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure
5 posted 2001-03-07 02:48 PM


VERY true! Nice poem, starryeyed. I appreciate the sentimental value. I know my closest friends are dear to me. I don't know what I would do wihtout them. I liked this post... Very nicely done.

*Jennifer

"My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see."

Dopey Dope
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6 posted 2001-03-07 03:54 PM


Cheers to good friends!!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies
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7 posted 2001-03-08 07:44 PM


I suggest you give this to your friend
beautiful write starr

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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