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Elephant Blues |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: This is me REALLY REALLY bored in math class. Elephant Blues: If ever a thing were as awesome, and big As an elephant's smelly ass I'd smile, fornw, but then run away. That's how it would come to pass. So I might trip, but I'd get up again Away from that monster thing. The elephant would never catch up, And I'd win a trophy and sing. But that's all crap because I stayed down. I never got up to run, And so that smelly elephant came And sat on me with his buns. My bones were crushing, and out of breath I slowly commenced to die. Elephant sitting on my body. This is what I imply! The years went on and there we were. Sitting, and crushed in bliss. And after a while he got up and left. Now it's his butt I miss.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
theres the elephant poem we were talking about! disturbing. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hardly disturbing. Beautiful, and I agree that we should often take the time to just take a deep breath and enjoy the elephant's ass. Well, on second thought, maybe forget the deep breath. -Allan |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
lmao "If ever a thing were as awesome, and big As an elephant's smelly ass" funniest line!! your halerious ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Dopey: I like your discussion of adaption. LOL, I know how you feel. My own personal thing I like to do in the MOST boring class[that'd be CAPP(Career and personal planning)class is draw aircraft schematics. BTW, was this written in math class? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh my, this is said very interestingly. Nice job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea fractal, written in math class haha. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
Yikes...you're kinda scaring me with this one...interesting i guess... |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
I know what ya mean!! Math class is stupid!! I have wrote some pretty dumb things in math class....it's just no one ever sees them!!! Keep writing! Love a work!! *~*Hope is a walking dream*~* *~*Don't take life too seriosly~~~you'll never get out alive*~* |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
that was extermly different, but good. i hope to see more....lol well good job regina |
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