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luvnkris
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0 posted 2001-01-18 05:59 AM


Here's the story behind my name - pretty obvious tho i guess!!


luvnkris is what i do
luvnkris is all i know
kris my boyfriend always with me
even when times are low
he's everything to me and so thats why
my name is luvnkris



* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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1 posted 2001-01-18 09:35 AM


This is a great way to respond to the challenge. Such a sweet username!   Thanks for sharing.


"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-01-18 09:53 AM


For some odd reason, i liked the last line of this poem... just caught me...
"he's everything to me and so thats why
my name is luvnkris"
Was I the only one?  Hope I'm not wierd or anything.  ^_^
Good answer to the challenge.
-Allan

Morouxshi San
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3 posted 2001-01-18 10:00 AM


no allan its just you.

nice story.




San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

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4 posted 2001-01-18 06:03 PM


Sweet


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-01-19 10:34 AM


Nice job on the poem, I'm glad to hear you're happy

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6 posted 2001-01-20 02:59 PM


Great answer to the challenge
one question though
I though Kris was the old boyfriend?
Aren't you dating someone else now?
Maybe i'm just confused, yeah that's probably it  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



luvnkris
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7 posted 2001-01-20 10:45 PM


nah kris has been my boy for over 6months now!
maybe you've seen his name as Kristian - i call him kris for short!!
catchya!
xoxo


* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



Virgil
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8 posted 2001-01-20 11:04 PM


What challenge is this? I don't keep up enough around here...oh well, everyone's glad you're happy! Lucky Kris!

"By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee."

"I AM CANADIAN!!"

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