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No one can compare (senryu)
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No one can compare (senryu) |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Inspirational, < !signature-->abundance within the soul. Perfect cant compare. To do anyting LESS then your BEST is to SACRIFICE the GIFT!!! [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I am really beginning to get into this whole senryu thing  As usual a lovely piece. Nice and peaceful. ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This was a nice piece of work. I am sure that the person it is addressed to will like it quite a lot. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey, I'm really getting something started, it seems! As for this senryu, nicely done! "Perfect can't compare" what a nice way to put it. Keep up the good work! I hope to see others posting more Senryu in here too! -Allan |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
one of the best senryus i've read so far i love the last line too I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Anonymousfemale, Yes and also I. Fractal007, Well, the person will never know it is addressed to him because i wont show him it. hehe Nice thought though. Allan, Yes, I believe you have. I like that is it sooo very different and such a wonderful way to explore the imagination within your mind. Acrie, Thank you so much that was sweet |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here........  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nice job of writing this one, it's done so well  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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