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DreamerGrl27
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 142

0 posted 2001-01-17 09:55 PM

An Escape

Dont you ever wish for an escape
Away from your worries and pain
Even just for one moment
To step inside from the rain.

To stop your mind from thinking
And let your heart be free
To forget your painful past
And how everything should to be.

To walk beside the ocean
As the wind blows through your hair
To hold your head up high
As you breathe in the fresh air.

To cuddle around the fire
With blankets from head to toe
To stare outside the window
At the freshly fallen snow.

To dine by candle light
With the one you love
To stare into their eyes
And know what they're thinking of.

To finally find your soulmate
And let them have your heart
To have a love so pure
That you know you'll never part.

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 2001-01-17 09:59 PM

"To cuddle around the fire
With blankets from head to toe
To stare outside the window
At the freshly fallen snow." --mmm, sounds good to me...wonderful piece here, I'm sure we can all relate. Keep it up!

*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

2 posted 2001-01-17 10:24 PM

wow, great poem. nice imagry. just has like a warm feeling about it. keep it up.

>¶ØÊ†<

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-01-18 05:56 PM

Nice one here, I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2001-01-19 10:26 AM

I really like the way this one flowed, it is written very well. Wonderful job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-01-19 12:39 PM

Hey Gurl-- I am shur that everyone has felt this same exact way at one point in their life or another. You never cease to amaze me with your peoms. Each verse is full of emotion and expression...absolutely amazing...you could visualize each stanza in your mind...dreaming along with what your writing about..that is excellent poetry...keep them comin! Luv Yaz

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

6 posted 2001-01-20 08:35 PM

Yes....much too many times....grea job on this one....
~Carly

inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog...

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