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Teen Poetry #4

Me :-) Tamma's Challenge

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

0 posted 2001-01-17 08:25 PM

*K i wasnt sure if this was supposed to be a Senryu or not..but oh well, here goes nothin

Me=-

I had rythm from the start
from my pink tutu i'd never part
For 13 years I've danced into my dreams
and I'll be dancing when I die, or so it seems
So from this is the origin of my name
remember me when I'm part of Hollywood's riches and fame

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-01-17 08:42 PM

Hey Dancinqueen! Nice to see you again! ^_^
Well met to the challenge, it's a nice poem.
I will remember you then! Be sure to say "hello" on TV sometime!
-Allan

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-17 09:30 PM

Nice one here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-01-18 01:16 AM

Hey nice work DancingQueen. When i see you on TV, I'll go, I used to write poetry with her!! lol

~AF~

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."
Buddha

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-01-18 09:09 AM

good job

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2001-01-19 10:02 AM

I love the poem, nice job on it and I hope you make it to your dreams

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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